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Do you know about that blog I told you about in the last post?
Well, I have no idea what to do with it. I've got two (one?) paragraphs in Chapter one, and from there, nothing:
Please, can anyone help me? Maybe an idea of what should happen, or something? Anything would be helpful right now.
Please and thank you!
EDIT:
Also, I would like to put this idea out there. The initial inspiration for GureOni was what I call, HetaOni: Who? In other words, Canada is the one to survive instead of Italy, because, y'know, the monster can't always see him. With that idea, I've been using original characters and all that. If you think it's a good idea, I could talk about it.
Well, I have no idea what to do with it. I've got two (one?) paragraphs in Chapter one, and from there, nothing:
That's definitely just one paragraph, isn't it...As the boys went to the wreck of a car their friends and classmates were in, Joanne and Erina went inside the building. The foyer was incredibly nice, with the lounge to the left and a gym almost immediately next to it.
"This is actually clean," Joanne commented. "Who would have known?" She turned to Erina, cursing herself inwardly when she saw the tears returning to her friend's eyes. "Hey, let's sit down," Joanne demanded. "There's a table there, see? And those chairs look nice."
Please, can anyone help me? Maybe an idea of what should happen, or something? Anything would be helpful right now.
Please and thank you!
EDIT:
Also, I would like to put this idea out there. The initial inspiration for GureOni was what I call, HetaOni: Who? In other words, Canada is the one to survive instead of Italy, because, y'know, the monster can't always see him. With that idea, I've been using original characters and all that. If you think it's a good idea, I could talk about it.
I've been doing a lot recently...
Not that it's bad! In fact, it's good! I've got a youtube account that I've been posting Let's Plays on, and I have a livejournal I made specifically for one story. It has only the Intro and a few posts, but I intend to have many chapters, and the chapters to be long.
Hope you enjoy!
Read this, please.
I would like it if you would look at the scrap I just submitted. It's a song in progress. To know what it's about, read the description of it. I would like help on it and just wanted to bring it to everyone's attention. (Everyone who reads this, anyway. x3) So, thank you if you do look at it, and if you don't that's fine, too. :)
-Tsuta-chan
Kind of annoyed. (Rant-ish)
Well, first journal entry in a while. This isn't made from my laptop, which saddens me. I'm at a reunion at my mom's college. They have a cyber cafe, so that's where I'm typing this from. But this laptop is HORRIBLE.... There MUST be something off about its keyboard, 'cactause I'm having some difficulty typing this. But I at least know no one's going to look over my shoulder. Nobody could care less what others are doing here, much less a teenager.
So, back to business (sort of). My mom wants me to go to camp. I DEFINATELY don't want to, ESPECIALLY the one she has her heart set on me going to. It's in the mountains in Tenessee(sp?).... I've b
Feelin'... Froggy.
Well, today, ladies and gentlemen (or people, I don't know how polite everyone is here o.o), is a special day (or a semi-special day, or not even a special day at all, considering several people on the planet are born every day). Today, some amount of years ago (I refuse to relase just how many), I was born. That's right, I am one year older. A few days ago, I found myself grieving over my lost childhood, even though it's technically not over yet. Yeah. I'm just that strange. But hey, it's not a crime, is it? But if it is, just arrest me now. >.>
So anyway, in other news, I'm pretty sure I'm gonna be playing Rook later tonight with my family
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