Well, I have no idea what to do with it. I've got two (one?) paragraphs in Chapter one, and from there, nothing:
That's definitely just one paragraph, isn't it...
As the boys went to the wreck of a car their friends and classmates were in, Joanne and Erina went inside the building. The foyer was incredibly nice, with the lounge to the left and a gym almost immediately next to it.
"This is actually clean," Joanne commented. "Who would have known?" She turned to Erina, cursing herself inwardly when she saw the tears returning to her friend's eyes. "Hey, let's sit down," Joanne demanded. "There's a table there, see? And those chairs look nice."
Please, can anyone help me? Maybe an idea of what should happen, or something? Anything would be helpful right now.
Please and thank you!
Also, I would like to put this idea out there. The initial inspiration for GureOni was what I call, HetaOni: Who? In other words, Canada is the one to survive instead of Italy, because, y'know, the monster can't always see him. With that idea, I've been using original characters and all that. If you think it's a good idea, I could talk about it.